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范文一:广东高考英语作文范文 投稿:梁僱僲

第五节 基础写作

火星:the Mars

第六节 读写任务

To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant, not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting the house or digging the garden.

What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something!

Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized. No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs.

[写作内容]1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法, 内容包括:

(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛;

(2)假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?

(3)你对平凡的工作的看法。

第一节:基础写作:参考范文

It is reported that thirty volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015. The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars. What’s more, it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with other members. Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard, for not only the extremely cold climate would they meet with, but also loneliness and fear. On the contrary , the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth,so greatly being eager to

experience the unknown , mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile, if the would be succeeded , they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings.

第二节:读写任务

In the passage , the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work , such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality for the organization of the society ,and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly.

There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is more harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand , they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are still in the sweet sleeping dreams . On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay , working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow, wind heavily.

Nobody could imagine what an bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we go , there is rubbish. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this !

From the above , I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job,such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respect as much as those being engineers or teachers.

2012

Ⅲ 写作(共两节,满分40分)

第一节基础写作 (共1小题;满分15分)

你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

【写作内容】

请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物

姓 名:Allan Stewart

国 籍:澳大利亚

出生日期:1915年3月7日

世界纪录:2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大

学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。

第一个学位:1936年获得

第二个学位:医学博士

第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006年获得硕士学位。

第四个学位:2012年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学习时间,受到老师表扬。 *硕士学位:master’s degree; **博士:doctor

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。

第二节读写任务(共1小题;满分25分)

阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student

when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.

In the letter she wrote,“You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”

What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.

[写作内容]

1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:

(1)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师;

(2)举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响;

(3)你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。

【基础写作】Allan Stewart,an Australian old man,born on March 7,1915,is already the holder of the world record for being the old graduate.He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile.He got his first degree in 1936,later along with a doctors degree of medicine.He decided to study law in his eighties,and he got the masters degree in 2006,which was his third degree.In 2012,he received his fourth degree by network learning,who was praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule.

【读写任务】

A thankyou letter from a former student of the writers husband meant a lot to the retired old man.From the letter,the writer learnt how great influence a teacher might have over his students.

The encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance to his/her student, especially when the student has trouble with study.Timely encouragement can raise his confidence and inspire his motivation to work hard. When I was in middle school, I had some difficulty in learning English. I couldnt remember the new words, so I always did poorly in the English exams. For some time I even decided to give up learning English. However, everything changed when I met Mrs. Jones, my new English teacher. She encouraged me to try some different methods to remember English words, and when I made a little progress, she always praised me, so I worked harder than ever. Gradually I became interested in remembering new words and began to catch up with the other students in my class. At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English.

Now I owe all my progress in English to Mrs. Jones whose encouragement has made me achieve what I have now. Here I want to send my sincere thanks from

heart to her.

2011

第一节基础写作

以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道

[写作内容]根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括:

1.图书的基本信息

2.图书的相关报道

[写作要求]只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯

第二节读写任务

阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.

He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) 安定wanted to go homes as soon as possible.

He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历,内容包括:

⑴ 时间、地点和起因;

⑵ 想家给学习和生活带来的影响;

⑶ 你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。

Version 1

A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and

professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.

Version 2

A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of parenting. A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.

读写任务

概括应包括以下要点;

(1) Sam was sent to a boarding school.

(2) Sam was homesick.

(3) Sam felt lonely and was angry with his parents.

写作内容应该包括:

(1) 时间、地点和起因。(2) 想家给学习或生活带来的影响。比如:上课精力不集中、成绩下降、生病等。

(3) 你(或你的朋友)是如何应对的。比如:结交新朋友、参加各种活动等

One possible version:

The passage told us that a student, Sam was sent to a boarding school, in which he very missed his parents, so he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons.

In fact, in real life, everyone can have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents was busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city. Here, I studied for two years. Although my aucle and his family were kind to me, I still felt homesick. At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there. And, because different teachers have different teaching methods, it was difficult for me to understand the lesson. Besides, I was new for the students there, I hardly had friends. I felt very lonely.

As days went on, I slowly adapted to the new environment. I actively communicated with my new students and made friends with them. My homesick gradually disappeared.

2010

第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)

以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。

二手烟:second-hand smoke

[写作内容]

请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:

1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;

2.目标和措施;

3.相关数据。

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV.This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?

Then one day Ethan’s mother made him an after in order to draw him back to his school subjects.She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV.None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quit TV.His mom paid him $200.He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.

In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades.All school kids admire this trend.But it upsets adults.Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will.Psychologists warn that money can actually make lies perform worse by making the act of learning cheap.The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should be despite decades of reforms and budget increases.

[写作内容]

1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论,内容包括:

(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法:

(2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的;

(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习

2009

第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)

你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:

[写作内容]

根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:

1. 采访的时间、对象和主题;

2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数;

3. 专家解读。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. That’s right—sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.

The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists,who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal,which is understandable. How would you react,my friend,if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round,furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?

* 考拉即树袋熊

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;

2. 然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论,内容包括:

(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照;

(2)假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应;

(3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。

范文二:广东高考英语作文2010分析 投稿:廖侅來

2010年高考英语(广东卷)基础写作题分析

【考例再现】

以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。

内容:公共场所禁烟

实施时间: 2011年1月1日起 实施范围:全国 目标:所有室内公共场所无烟 措施:张贴禁烟标志

相关数据: (1) 吸烟人数:约3.5亿 (2) 分布:男性75%;女性25%

(3) 受二手烟影响人数:约5.4亿 (4) 因二手烟死亡人数:超过10万/年

*二手烟:second-hand smoke

[写作内容] 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:

1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围; 2.目标和措施; 3.相关数据。

[写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

【写作点评】

★ 话题评述

2010年广东省高考英语基础写作的主题是“公共场所禁烟”,与去年“学生近视眼情况调查”这个贴近考生生活的话题相比,今年的基础写作更贴近的是社会公共生活。总体来说,今年广东省高考英语基础写作题呈现以下几个鲜明特点:

1.作文话题从社会性公共生活中采点

香烟已成为健康的头号杀手,禁烟已成为世界性的话题。这个话题真正的做到“话题来源于实际生活”。公共场所禁烟是当下炒得正热的热点,考生或多或少应该都对这个话题有所了解。因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说。

2.作文话题选材贴近新课程标准理念

作文话题在引用了相关数据的同时其实也在暗示学生吸烟的危害性。单从这一点来讲,今年的基础写作题目成功的做到了“时刻关注每一个学生的健康成长”,成功的把新课程标准理念注入到学生的考卷中。

3.作文话题具有极高的公平合理性

考试的作文话题只有保证每一个考生都熟悉才能真正的做到命题的公平合理性。今年的作文话题从整个社会都关注的“禁烟”话题中采点,革除了城乡考生因对某一个话题了解程度的不同而导致的不合理性。这也说明今年基础写作题目的命题人经过了多方面的深思熟虑。

★ 思路点拨

2010年广东省高考英语的基础写作为应用文中的通讯报道。试题详细地给出了内容要点,为控制性写作。这次的写作主题是“禁烟通告”,并且要求考生阐述与之相关的信息。在文章结构方面,一定要紧扣考题已给出的写作提示:第一和第二点分别用一个句子来阐述,后面的相关数据可以分成三个句子来写。要写好此文,考生需要注意三点:一是要认真审题,确定体裁、人称和时态等;二是要运用适当的句型,合理地组织文字;三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用

连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。

1.时态的把握一定要准确,文章前半部分是一则2011年生效的通告,应该采用将来时态,而后半部分是对于现实状况的描述,应该使用一般现在时。

2.在词汇方面,这篇文章当中的数字翻译是一个难点:在英文中,数字的翻译以千(thousand),百万(million)为单位,因此,3.5亿,5.4亿,10万这些数字转换成相应的英文表达:350 million,540 million,100 thousand。此外,“smoke”是本文的中心词,它既有名词的用法,表示烟,比如说:所有室内公共场所无烟应该翻译成:There will not be smoke indoor public places;同时,“smoke”又有动词的用法,表示抽烟,比如“禁烟”的翻译“forbid smoking”就用到了动词的非谓语形式。因此,考生在写相关概念的时候一定要分清词性,避免出错。

3.在句型方面,为了用五个句子表达全部内容,复合句的使用依然是考查的重点,比如说相关数据中的人数和分布这两个点联系紧密,可以用定语从句合并为一个句子:It is reported that 350 million people smoke, among which 75% are men while 25% are women. 此外,这篇文章是一则通告的描述,应该写得正式而客观,因此在语态的选择方面,善用被动语态的策略在这篇文章中再合适不过了,比如“公共场所禁烟”用被动语态表达为“Smoking will be forbidden in public places.”则比考生惯用的主动句型“We will forbid smoking in public places.”更为恰当。同样,张贴禁烟标志也可以运用被动语态翻译成:“No Smoking” signs will be put up.如果考生能在文中这几个地方使用被动,文章一定会更加简洁、正式和得体。

【范文展示1】

According to a report by the China’s government, there are about 350 million smokers in China, of whom 75% are men and 25% women./ People affected by second-hand smoke add up to about 540 million and more than 100 thousand of them die each year. / Faced with such a challenging situation, therefore, the China’s government decides to forbid smoking in public places nation-widely from January 1st, 2011. / By then, signs will be put up to forbid smoking. /With this measure, I am sure we can make all the public indoor places free of smoke.

【范文展示2】

The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country. /This decision, which will be carried out from January 1st, 2011, aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment. /In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. /Statistics show that China has approximately 350,000,000 smokers, among whom 75% are men and 25% are women. /Around 540,000,000 people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.

【范文展示3】

The Chinese government

has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. /This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, will come into effect from the first of January, 2011. /To this end, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. /Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. /Around 540 million people are influenced by second-hand smoke, which causes 100,000 deaths per year.

【范文展示4】

Our country has begun to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011. /The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. /There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent./ Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. /More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second-smoke.

【范文展示5】

The Chinese government has issued a nationwide regulation that smoking is no permitted in public places from January 1, 2011. /It required that in-doors public-places must be no-smoking. /What’s more, in order to carry it out effectively, putting up signs related to banning smoke was advised by government. /Up to now, 350 million Smokers consisting of 75% male and 25% female are suffering. /Among about 540 million people influenced by second-hand smoke, the rate of death is over 100 thousand per year.

附:【基础写作评分标准】

基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力:能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本题目要求考生根据所提供的信息,使用5个句子表达[写作内容]所提供的全部内容。评分时,按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分。

【小试牛刀】

模拟训练(一)

广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英文节目,新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在,John就有关节目的内容向广大中学生征求意见。你是广州某高中的学生李华,建议开办“广州全接触”(All-around Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下你的节目设想给John写信建议开办该节目:

【写作内容】

节目内容:介绍广州的历史、教育名人、著名景点、饮食。

播出时间:每周六、日下午,方便学生周末观看。

其他设想:邀请中学生参加节目,提高学生的收看兴趣。

理由:1)中学生可更多地了解广州文化,在亚运会期间向外国游客介绍广州;

2)有助于提高中学生的英文水平。

预期:将会受到中学生的欢迎。

【写作要求】

1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;

2. 书信开头和结尾已给出,不计算在5个句子中。

Dear John,

I know you’re going to have an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program ---- “ All-

around Guangzhou”……

I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【评分标准】

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

One possible version:

Dear John,

I know you’re going to have an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program ---- “ All-around Guangzhou”.

This program will cover topics like the history, education, scenic spots, foods and famous people of Guangzhou. It should be broadcast on Saturday and Sunday afternoons so that we students can have the chance to watch it. Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse the other students’ interest in it. This program will not only get students to know about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors during the 2010 Asian Games, but also help them improve their English. I am sure it will be well-received by middle school students.

I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

模拟训练(二)

亚运会即将在广州举行。作为学校英语俱乐部的成员,你准备明天向到访的英国学生游学团介绍8月4日已在广州举行的亚运倒计时100天的庆祝活动(100-day Countdown Ceremony)。

【写作内容】

1. 100天庆祝活动的时间:2010年8月4日7:30;

2. 庆祝活动地点:广州天河体育馆(Tianhe Sports Gymnasium);

3. 主题:Dreaming about This Moment;4. 意义: 展示广州已经准备好了;5. 活动安排:

1) 龙舟和武术表演; 2) 2000名合唱团成员(chorus)演唱;

3)著名歌手演唱三首亚运会候选主题歌(theme song candidates);

6. 参加人员: 1000多名志愿者, 工人,医务人员,学生,老干部(retirees)等。

【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。(开头已给,不计入总句数)

Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to our school. I’d like to tell you something about Guangzhou Asian Games….

【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

One possible version:

Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to our school. I’d like to tell you something about Guangzhou Asian Games. At 7:30, August 4, 2010, Guangzhou Asian Games 100-day Countdown Ceremony was held in Tianhe Sports Gymnasium. With the theme “Dreaming about This Moment”, the ceremony meant to show that Guangzhou was ready for the coming Games. Starting with Dragon Boat and Wushu performances, the ceremony also included 2000 chorus’ s

inging. The most exciting moment came when three theme song candidates were sung by famous singers. More than 1000 volunteers, workers, doctors and nurses, students and referees participated in this ceremony.

模拟训练(三)

你的美国笔友在信中说他即将来参观上海的世博会,并且想在世博会展览馆附近租一套房子。现请你帮忙物色并把相关信息告诉他。下面是你所物色到的一套出租房的信息。

面积 82平方米。

位置 位于黄浦边,12 层,离世博会中心只需20分钟车程。

特征 2房一厅,独立厨房和卫生间;干净,明亮,装修豪华;周围环境优美。

租金 按日算,每天80元;按月计,每月1600元。

【写作内容】请根据以上信息写一封回信。

【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

One possible version:

Dear Paul,

As is mentioned in your last letter, you are looking forward to visiting the 2010 EXPO in Shanghai and hope that I can find an apartment for you. Now let me give you a brief introduction to one with an area of 82 square metres, which has one living room and two bedrooms. Located on the Huangpu River and surrounded by beautiful environment, it is on the 12th floor and only 20 minutes’ ride from the EXPO centre. More importantly, it is luxuriously decorated with individual kitchen and toilet and what appeals to me most is the clean and bright surrounding. You can rent it by day or by month with the cost of 80 yuan each day or 1600 yuan per month.

模拟训练(四)

你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友”的话题展开了讨论,下面是讨论记录:

60%的同学 到 商店买礼物好 商店的礼物精致、美观,适合赠送

40%的同学 自己制作礼物好 自己制作礼物能够展现个人才能,培养动手能力,增强节约意识

你的看法 ?

【写作内容】1. 讨论的时间和话题;2. 同学们的意见和各自的理由;3. 你的看法。

【写作要求】1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

One possible version:

Our class had a heated discussion last Friday on what gifts we should give to our classmates and friends. Sixty percent of our classmates said that they would buy gifts from a shop because they think such gifts are delicate and pretty, thus proper for giving. However, the others prefer to make the gifts by themselves. On the one hand, this can show their personal outstanding skills and help them develop their abilities to do things themselves and on the other hand, they can use materials from home to make gifts, which can strengthen their awareness of importance of saving.

In my opinion, giving gifts made by ourselves is a better way to expres

s our feelings.

范文三:2010广东英语高考作文 投稿:杜瞲瞳

普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(广东卷)

第一节 完形填空(共10小题;每小题2分,满分20分)

Every country has its own culture.

Even though each country uses doors. Doors many and purposes they had distinct functions. You have to push the door with the word “PUSH” to go out of the building and to pull the door with the word “PULL” tobecause we use the in south Korea. For quite a few times I failed to go out of a shopping centre and was embarrassed. classes. The school decided that when the driver opened both the front and back doors, . In south Korea, we do not need to wait for people to get off. One morning, I hurried to 21. A.different B.important C.practical D.unusual

22. A.national B.embarrassing C.cultural D.amazing

23. A.exits B.entrances C.signs D.doors

24.A.enter B.leave C.open D.close

25. A.main B.same C.front D.back

26.A.disturbing B.hard C.satisfying D.strange

27.A.parents B.students C.teachers D.drivers

28.A.sooner B.later C.faster D.earlier

29.A.politely B.patiently C.unconsciously D.slowly

30.A.embarrassed B.annoyed C.unsatisfied D.excited

第二节 语法填空 (共10笑题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)

A young man, while traveling through a desert,came across a spring of clear to an old man had been his teacher. After a four-day journey, the young the water to the old man. His teacher took a deep drink, the student left, the teacher let another student taste the water. He spit it out, He asked his teacher,” Sir, the water was awful. Why did you pretend to like _______?”

The teacher replied,” You tasted the water. I tasted the gift. The water was simply the container for

We understand this lesson best when we receive gifts of love from children. Whether it is a cheap the gift rather than the thing.

Ⅲ.阅读(共两节,满分40分)

B

When something goes wrong,it can be very satisfying to say,”Well,it’s so-and-so’s fault.”or “I know I’m late,but it’s not my fault;the car broke down.”It is probably not your fault,but once you form the habit of blaming somebody or something else for a bad situation,you are a loser. You have no power and could do nothing that helps change the situation. However,you can have great power over what happens to you if you stop focusing on whom to blame and start focusing on how to situation. This is the winner’s key to success.

Winners are great at overcoming problems. For example, if you were late because your car broke down, maybe you need to have your car examined more regularly. Or, you might start to carry

along with you the useful phone numbers, so you could call for help when in need. For another example, if your colleague causes you problems on the job for lack of responsibility or ability, find ways of dealing with his irresponsibility or inability rather than simply blame the person. Ask to work with a different person, or don’t rely on the person. You should accept that the person. Ask to work with a different person, or don’t rely on this person. You should accept that the person is not reliable and find creative ways to work successfully regardless of how your colleague fails to do his job well.

This is what being a winner is all about—creatively using your skills and talents so that you are successful no matter what happens. Winners don’t have fewer problems in their lives; they have just as many difficult situations to face as anybody else. They are just better at seeing those problems as challenges and opportunities to develop their own talents. So, stop focusing on “whose fault it is.” Once you are confident about your power over bad situations, problems are just stepping stop on for success.

46. According to the passage, winners

A. deal with problems rather than blame others

B. meet with fewer difficulties in their lives

C. have responsible and able colleagues

D. blame themselves rather that others

47.The underlined word remedy in Paragraph 1 is closest in meaning to .

A. avoid

B. accept

C. improve

D. consider

48.When your colleague brings about a problem, you should A. find a better way to handle the problem

B. blame him for his lack of responsibility

C. tell him to find the cause of the problem

D. ask a more able colleague for help

49. When problems occur, winners take them as

A. excuses for their failures

B. barriers to greater power

C. challenges to their colleagues

D.chances for self-development

50. Which of the following is the best title for the passage? A. A Winner’s Secret.

B. A Winner’s Problem.

C. A Winner’s Opportunity. D. A Winner’s Achievement.

A

When I was growing up in America, I was ashamed of my mother’s Chinese English. Because of her English, she was often treated unfairly. People in department stores, at banks, And at restaurants did not take her seriously ,did not give her good service ,pretended not to Understand her ,or even acted as if they did not hear her.

My mother has realized the limitations of her English as well. When I was fifteen, she used to have me call people on phone to pretend I was she . I was forced to ask for information or even to yell at people who had been rude to her. One time I had to call her stockbroker (股票经纪人).I said in an adolescent voice that was not very convincing, “This is Mrs.Tan.”

And my mother was standing beside me ,whispering loudly, “Why he don’t send me cheek already two week lone.”

And then , in perfect English I said : “I’m getting rather concerned .You agreed to send the check two weeks ago, but it hasn’t arrived.”

Then she talked more loudly. “What he want? I come to New York tell him front of his boss.” And so I turned to the stockbroker again, “I can’t tolerate any more excuse. If I don’t receive the check immediately , I am going to have to speak to your manager when I am in New York next week.”

The next week we ended up in New York. While I was sitting there red-faced, my mother, the real Mrs.Tan, was shouting to his boss in her broken English.

When I was a teenager, my mother’s broken English embarrassed me. But now, I see it differently. To me, my mother’s English is perfectly clear, perfectly natural. It is my mother tongue. Her language, as I hear it, is vivid, direct, and full of observation and wisdom. It was the language that helped shape the way I saw things, expressed ideas, and made sense of the world.

41.Why was the author’s mother poorly served? A.She was unable to speak good English.

B.She was often misunderstood.

C.She was not clearly heard.

D.She was not very polite.

42.From Paragorph 2, we know that the author was A.good a pretending

B.rude to the stockbroker

C.ready to help her mother

D.unwilling to phone for her mother

43.After the author made the phone call, .

A.they forgave the stockbroker

B.they failed to get the check

C.they went to New York immediately

D.they spoke to their boss at once

44.What does the author think of her mother’s English now?

A.It confuses her.

B.It embarrasses her.

C.It helps her understand the world.

D.It helps her tolerate rude people.

45.We can inter from the passage that Chinese English A.is clear and natural to non-native speakers

B.is vivid and direct to non-native speakers

C.has a verv bad reputation in America

D.may bring inconvenience in America

选词填空

selfish active award in time prevent…from energy harm give birth baggage depend on

existence oxygen satisfy gravity atmosphere

1. The dogs were trained to detect the ____________ of explosives(炸弹). If they are spotted, the

policemen need to remove them.

2. when transferring. They had put all their clothes in them, so they felt

very sad.

3. There was a shortage of __________ at the top of the mountains, where it is difficult to breathe

for people.

4. The ___________ over dinner was warm and friendly, because many friends can have fun with

each other.

5. The force that attracts objects in space towards each other, and on the earth pulls them towards

the center of the planet is called ____________.

6. I will never ______________ loving her by any creature on earth.

7. Do your best in your career, you’ll succeed ____________.

8. The man who is too old to make his living has to ____________ his two sons for food and

clothing.

9. Something that is ___________ has a bad effect on something else, especially on a person's health.

10. When a woman _______________, she produces a baby from her body.

范文四:广东高考英语作文指导 投稿:陆鑈鑉

广东高考英语作文指导

我个人认为要写好作文,要学好“折腾”的本领,写作过程就是“折腾”的过程。它给我们一个标题,要求我们能够用正确,规范的语言来表达特定的内容。那么,我们就把它看成一个平台,一个展示我们平时积累的知识与句子结构的平台,把作文变成一个“句式和知识的万国博览会”。

关于基础写作

首先,把给出的信息划分为五个句子,确定先后顺序。然后尽可能使用各种句式结构把每个句子完美地“翻译”出来。要熟练地使用各种常用的句式结构。如:be able to ;be interested in/take interest in;remind of;be busy doing;stop from doing sth;calm down;as...as;there is/are...;fail to do sth;fit in;have an influence on;enable...to do...;it is one’s first time to do sth;can’t help doing;can’t waite to do;so...that...;succeed in doing;account for doing;suffer from等。要熟练使用定语从句,状语从句,同位语从句,主语从句等常用句型作为文章的骨架,提高文章档次。当然,平时加强训练是非常重要的。我建议大家把各种形式的基础写作归纳起来。不外乎下面几种,图表作文,表格作文,讨论辩论,发言稿,通知,人物简介,今昔对比,叙事经过,兴趣爱好,以及写一些灾难事件,像地震或海啸等。每一种选一篇有代表性的背诵下来并会灵活运用就好了。把每一篇文章作文一个小“基地”,不断进行深化,比如写辩论该不该建核电站,你就注意有关这方面的文章【最好是英文的】,借鉴一些更好的建议改进文章。不仅可以精益求精,还可以提高你搜索资料的能力,对你的阅读能力大有帮助。基础写作(中国的基本情况)

假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友Daniel想在2008年随同父母来中国观看奥运会,他对中国很感兴趣,想及早了解中国的基本情况。请你根据提示给他写一篇英语作文。

[写作内容]

国名 中华人民

共和国

地理位置 亚洲东部,

面临太平洋

面积 九百六十万

平方公里

人口

13亿

民 族

56

气候

冬冷夏热

国情 1. 有勤劳勇敢的人民,拥有5000年的文明;

2. 首都北京将在2008年8月8日举办第29届奥运会。

[写作要求]

1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;

2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯One possible version:

The People’s Republic of China lies in the east of Asia, facing the Pacific Ocean, and covers a total area of 9600000 square kilometers and five of the world’s 24 times areas. China belongs to continental climate, that is, cold in winter and hot in summer depending on different areas.

China has 56 nationalities with the largest population of 1.3 billion in the world. We are a hard-working and brave people with a civilization of 5000 years. So we hope China will successfully host the 29th Olympic Games on October 8th, 2008, in the capital of Beijing, China.

读写任务

概括记叙文内容要点,The author tells a story about......概括议论文的内容要点,The author thinks that........概括完要点,文章开头要先和材料联系起来,比如故事型的,The story reminds me of a experience that.....;议论型的,I completely agree what the author says.We should ......文章正文同样要事先规划好,把要点先用英语翻译出来,不遗漏要点。一般按照是什么,为什么,怎么样的顺序排列写作。理由的有For one thing...for another...;The reason why...is that....;措施的按firstly,...secondly,...thirdly,...lastly,...为写好读写任务,要学好利弊对比,赞成反对,说明理由,分析原因,观点论证,说明计划,发表看法,问题解决,心得体会和经历感受。同样找个典例,然后背诵和灵活运用。例:读写任务

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。

English has been getting more and more popular in the last decade. Many countries have made English taught as the second language in schools. But why do students need English? If they do need, what do they need it for?

Different students learn English for different purposes. Most of the students learn English because they need to read English textbooks or journals and attend English lectures, while a few students use it to talk to English-speaking visitors, attend seminars(研讨会), or write letters and reports.

Whatever the purposes are, one thing is certain: Students need English, and English teaching should be strengthened in universities. However, the current teaching methods should be improved and the teaching materials should be updated to satisfy their needs.

I think the number one problem is vocabulary. I believe that we can learn English words by heart through reading. If we read so many articles, we can remember lots of words. And we also can watch English movies and listen to the English songs to enlarge our vocabulary and increase our listening skills. In language learning, the sense of language is important than grammar, so it is important for us in reading comprehension. What’s more, we can try to communicate with people in English. This is good for our oral English.

In a word, in English learning, we need to persistently practise our listening, speaking, reading and writing. Let's do it now.

[写作内容]

(1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点;

(2) 然后以约120个词就 “纯英语课堂好,还是英汉兼用课堂好” 的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:

① 你认为纯英语课堂好,还是英汉兼用课堂好?请选择其一,并说出其以下优缺点:

② 你的结论。

[写作要求]

(1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

(2) 标题自定。

[评分标准]

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

[读写任务优秀范文⑴]

As it is widely used in the world, English is learned by almost everyone on earth. People try to master it for different purposes. To learn English well, we should practise it when and where possible.

I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly.

However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we haven’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learner may even lose interest in English.

Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.

[读写任务优秀范文(2)]

As it is widely used in the world, English is learned by almost everyone on earth. People try to master it for different purposes. To learn English well, we should practise it when and where possible.

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. As middle school students, we only have a small vocabulary. If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class, we will understand the lesson better.

Of course, an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings. Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning. Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well.

If you want to learn a lesson well, you have to understand it first. To help students understand the lesson better, the teacher should use Chinese from time to time. Therefore, I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching

范文五:2011广东英语高考小作文 投稿:侯蹵蹶

2011广东高考——图书介绍(句式:图书出版,教育方式,引发讨论,不赞同,据报道)

以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。

基本信息:

(1) 书名:Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

(2) 作者:Amy Chuo,美籍华人,耶鲁大学教授

(3) 出版时间:2010年

(4) 内容:作者用中国传统教育方式教育两个女儿的故事

(5) 效应:引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道:

(1) 中文版:2011年初开始在中国销售

(2) 意外反应:多数中国妈妈不同意作者的做法

(3) 最新消息:17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取 ×耶鲁:Yale 哈佛:Harvard

【写作内容】

根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括:

1. 图书的基本信息

2. 图书的相关报道

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

【评分标准】

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。

参考范文:

【Version1】

A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chuo was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.

【Version2】

A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chuo, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Ever since its publication, a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy

Chuo’s way of parenting. A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.

范文六:2014广东高考英语作文 投稿:董蓴蓵

(10分)Ⅰ.探究细胞膜的成分 某研究性学习小组欲研究细胞膜的结构和成分,如果你是课题组成员,请你设计一个简易实验得到较纯净的细胞膜,并对其成分进行鉴定。 A.成熟红细胞 B.神经细胞 C.白细胞 D.口腔上皮细胞

(1)应选取人的哪种细胞做实验( )

(2)将选取的上述材料放入 ,由于渗透作用,一段时间后细胞将破裂。 (3)将经过(2)的实验步骤后,再用 法获得纯净的细胞膜。将膜成分分离提纯后,加入双缩脲试剂,如果产生紫色反应,可以证明细胞膜成分中含有 。

(4)若将细胞膜的磷脂提取后放入盛有水的容器中,经过充分搅拌后,下列能正确反应其分布的图是( )

Ⅱ.探究温度对细胞膜流动性的影响 物质通过细胞膜与细胞膜的流动性有密切关系,为了探究温度对细胞膜流动性的影响,做了下述实验:分别用红色、绿色荧光剂标记人和鼠细胞膜上的蛋白质,然后让两个细胞在37℃下融合,40分钟后,发现融合后细胞膜上的红色和绿色均匀相间分布。有人认为该实验没有完成,请你继续完成该探究实验:

(1)补充未完成步骤: 。

(2)请指出可以可以从哪个方面来观察实验结果:

(3)请预测该实验最可能得出的结论:

。 Ⅰ.(1)A (2)清水(3)离心 蛋白质 (4)A(1分1空)

Ⅱ.(2分1空)

(1)分别将细胞放在温度低于37℃(如0℃)、高于37℃(如60℃)的条件下重复上述实验

(2)相同时间之后,观察红色和绿色荧光物质在细胞膜上分布的情况 或比较红色和绿色荧光物质在细胞膜上均匀分布时所需要的时间

(3)在一定温度范围内,随着温度的升高,细胞膜的流动性加强

范文七:2010广东英语高考小作文 投稿:胡鑾鑿

2010广东高考——政府报告(数字表达,因果句,不定式表示目的句)

以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报导的主要内容。

二手烟:second-hand smoke

【写作内容】

请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:

1. 禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;

2. 目标和措施;

3. 相关数据。

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

参考答案:

【Version1】

The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. The decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, came into effect on the first day of 2011. To this end, non-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75% are man and 25% are woman. Around 540 million people are negatively influenced by second-hand smoke, which is to blame for 100,000 deaths per year.

【Version2】

The Chinese government has decided to carry out / impose a national ban on / launch a nationwide campaign against smoking in public places across the country, which came into effect on January 1, 2011. This decision is intended to create a smoke-free indoor environment. To achieve this goal, non-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Statistics reveal that China has approximately 350 million smokers, among whom 75% are man and 25% are woman. Around 540 million people are severely affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths per year.

范文八:广东英语高考满分作文 投稿:曹燉燊

2013

第一节:基础写作: It is reported that thirty volunteers to be sent to the Mars who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe by the year of 2015. The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars. What’s more, it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with other members. Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard, for not only the extremely cold climate would they meet with, but also loneliness and fear. On the contrary, the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth, so greatly being eager to experience the unknown, mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile, if they would succeed, they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings.

第二节:读写任务

In the passage, the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work, such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality for the organization of the society, and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly.

There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is much harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand, they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are still in the sweet sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow, wind heavily.

Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we went, there would be rubbish. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this!

From the above, I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street, is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respected as much as those being engineers or doctors.

2009 Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can’t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.

When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.

If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn’t feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.

However, I don’t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time, during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

范文九:2012广东高考英语作文 投稿:胡互亓

  读写任务(共1小题;满分25分)  阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。  My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.  In the letter she wrote,“You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”  What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.    [写作内容]  1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。  2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:  (1)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师;  (2)举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响;  (3)你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。  [写作要求]  1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。  2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。  [评分标准]  概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。    概括参考:  The writer’s husband received a Thank You letter from his students when he is in poor,which tells the teachers effort on the students.The letter has a special meaning to the teacher.      【参考指导】    2012年高考英语作文评分标准  1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。   2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。   3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。   4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。   5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。  6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。   7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。     【2012年高考英语作文评分标准--各档次的给分范围和要求】   第五档(很好);(21-25分)   1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。   2. 覆盖所有内容要点。   3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。   4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。   5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。   6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。     第四档(好):(16-20分)   1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。   2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。   3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。   4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。   5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。   6. 达到了预期的写作目的。     第三档(适当):(11-15分)   1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。   2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。   3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。   4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。   5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。   6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。     第二档(较差):(6-10分)   1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。   2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。   3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。   4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。   5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。   6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。     第一档(差):(1-5分)   1. 未完成试题规定的任务。   2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。   3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。   4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。   5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。   6. 信息未能传达给读者。   不得分:(0分)   未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清

范文十:广东高考英语作文 投稿:段奟奠

广东高考英语作文全攻略

我个人认为要写好作文,要学好“折腾”的本领,写作过程就是“折腾”的过程。它给我们一个标题,要求我们能够用正确,规范的语言来表达特定的内容。那么,我们就把它看成一个平台,一个展示我们平时积累的知识与句子结构的平台,把作文变成一个“句式和知识的万国博览会”。

关于基础写作

首先,把给出的信息划分为五个句子,确定先后顺序。然后尽可能使用各种句式结构把每个句子完美地“翻译”出来。要熟练地使用各种常用的句式结构。如:be able to ;be interested in/take interest in;remind of;be busy doing;stop from doing sth;calm down;as...as;there is/are...;fail to do sth;fit in;have an influence on;enable...to do...;it is one’s first time to do sth;can’t help doing;can’t waite to do;so...that...;succeed in doing;account for doing;suffer from等。要熟练使用定语从句,状语从句,同位语从句,主语从句等常用句型作为文章的骨架,提高文章档次。当然,平时加强训练是非常重要的。我建议大家把各种形式的基础写作归纳起来。不外乎下面几种,图表作文,表格作文,讨论辩论,发言稿,通知,人物简介,今昔对比,叙事经过,兴趣爱好,以及写一些灾难事件,像地震或海啸等。每一种选一篇有代表性的背诵下来并会灵活运用就好了。把每一篇文章作文一个小“基地”,不断进行深化,比如写辩论该不该建核电站,你就注意有关这方面的文章【最好是英文的】,借鉴一些更好的建议改进

文章。不仅可以精益求精,还可以提高你搜索资料的能力,对你的阅读能力大有帮助。基础写作(中国的基本情况)

假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友Daniel想在2008年随同父母来中国观看奥运会,他对中国很感兴趣,想及早了解中国的基本情况。请你根据提示给他写一篇英语作文。

[写作内容]

国名 中华人民

共和国

地理位置 亚洲东部,

面临太平洋

面积 九百六十万

平方公里

人口

13亿

民 族

56

气候

冬冷夏热

国情 1. 有勤劳勇敢的人民,拥有5000年的文明;

2. 首都北京将在2008年8月8日举办第29届奥运会。

[写作要求]

1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;

2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯One possible version:

The People’s Republic of China lies in the east of Asia, facing the Pacific Ocean, and covers a total area of 9600000 square kilometers and five of the world’s 24 times areas. China belongs to continental climate, that is, cold in winter and hot in summer depending on different areas.

China has 56 nationalities with the largest population of 1.3 billion in the world. We are a hard-working and brave people with a civilization of 5000 years. So we hope China will successfully host the 29th Olympic Games on October 8th, 2008, in the capital of Beijing, China.

读写任务

概括记叙文内容要点,The author tells a story about......概括议论文的内容要点,The author thinks that........概括完要点,文章开头要先和材料联系起来,比如故事型的,The story reminds me of a experience that.....;议论型的,I completely agree what the author says.We should ......文章正文同样要事先规划好,把要点先用英语翻译出来,不遗漏要点。一般按照是什么,为什么,怎么样的顺序排列写作。理由的有For one thing...for another...;The reason why...is that....;措施的按firstly,...secondly,...thirdly,...lastly,...为写好读写任务,要学好利弊对比,赞成反对,说明理由,分析原因,观点论证,说明计划,发表看法,问题解决,心得体会和经历感受。同样找个典例,然后背诵和灵活运用。例:读写任务

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。

English has been getting more and more popular in the last decade. Many countries have made English taught as the second language in schools. But why do students need English? If they do need, what do they need it for?

Different students learn English for different purposes. Most of the students learn English because they need to read English textbooks or journals and attend English lectures, while a few students use it to talk

to English-speaking visitors, attend seminars(研讨会), or write letters and reports.

Whatever the purposes are, one thing is certain: Students need English, and English teaching should be strengthened in universities. However, the current teaching methods should be improved and the teaching materials should be updated to satisfy their needs.

I think the number one problem is vocabulary. I believe that we can learn English words by heart through reading. If we read so many

articles, we can remember lots of words. And we also can watch English movies and listen to the English songs to enlarge our vocabulary and increase our listening skills. In language learning, the sense of language is important than grammar, so it is important for us in

reading comprehension. What’s more, we can try to communicate with people in English. This is good for our oral English.

In a word, in English learning, we need to persistently practise our listening, speaking, reading and writing. Let's do it now.

[写作内容]

(1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点;

(2) 然后以约120个词就 “纯英语课堂好,还是英汉兼用课堂好” 的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:

① 你认为纯英语课堂好,还是英汉兼用课堂好?请选择其一,并说出其以下优缺点:

② 你的结论。

[写作要求]

(1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

(2) 标题自定。

[评分标准]

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

[读写任务优秀范文⑴]

As it is widely used in the world, English is learned by almost

everyone on earth. People try to master it for different purposes. To learn English well, we should practise it when and where possible.

I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an

environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly.

However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we haven’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learner may even lose interest in English.

Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of

practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.

[读写任务优秀范文(2)]

As it is widely used in the world, English is learned by almost

everyone on earth. People try to master it for different purposes. To learn English well, we should practise it when and where possible.

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. As middle school students, we only have a small vocabulary. If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class, we will understand the lesson better.

Of course, an English class taught in two languages has its

shortcomings. Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning. Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well.

If you want to learn a lesson well, you have to understand it first. To help students understand the lesson better, the teacher should use Chinese from time to time. Therefore, I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching

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